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Nazi! Germany X Reader - Try

~ 4 Hours Earlier ~

I don't give a damn what you say or think Ludwig, that man is a  disgrace to your country and to the people who live in it ,and all you can do is follow his every order.

ENOUGH,I do not vant to here anothzer vord about zhis ever again, Do I make myself clear (Y/N)?

You looked into those once blue eyes that you fell in love before the war began, that have now turned purple, ever since Ludwig's new boss came into his life he changed into a different person.

"But what the hell have those people even done to deserve this, how can you let that bastard." *SMACK*

You placed your hand on your now swollen cheek.

"Listen and listen good (Y/N), Don't ever tell me how to do my job and as far as I'm concerned you need to learn your place."

As Ludwig walked out the door leaving you all alone, all you could do was rub your cheek and cry yourself to sleep.

~ 12:00 A.M. ~

(Y/N) opened her eyes and sat up, she looked over and stared at the blonde haired man sleeping right next to her, "He looks like an angel,"she smiled at the thought.

"But behind that face is something I wish I never met."

(Y/N) quietly got out of bed and walked to the bathroom, she turned on the light and stared at her bruised cheek that Ludwig had left.
(Y/N) felt the tears fall down her face and quickly wiped them away with her hand, "I can't stay here with him anymore," she thought to herself. "It's not good for me.
Without hesitation (Y/N) grabbed some of her belongings and packed them into her suitcase.

~Ever wonder bout' what he's doing, How it all turned to lies
Sometimes I think that its better, to never ask why~

(Y/N) looked over at her sleeping boyfriend and placed her soft (S/C) hand on his cheek and watched his chest slowly rise and fall,"I will always love you but I can't stay with you anymore", she whispered while the tears began to fall again.
As quietly as she could, (Y/N) bent down towards Ludwig's angelic face and kissed his lips softly.

"Goodbye Meine Liebe", she whispered and walked out of the bedroom, down the hallway and out into the darkness.

~Where there is desire, there is gonna be a flame
Where there is a flame, someone's bound to get burned
But just because it burns doesn't mean your gonna die
You gotta get up and try, and try, and try
Gotta get up and try, and try, and try
You gotta get up and try, and try, and try~
My very first fanfic that I'm making for my best friend and I gave Germany his accent cuz it sounds better with it.
Sorry if its too short but there will be more.
Hope you like it. ^_^

Based off of P!nk's song "Try"


Part 1: Here

Part 2: [link]

Part 3: [link]

Part 4: [link]

Part 5: [link]

Part 6: [link]

Part 7: [link]

Part 8 (Finale): [link]
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AnimezingOtaku 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
:icondoryplz: this is gonna be good, I can feel it!
sweet-MissHungary Nov 23, 2013  Student Writer
I was about to scream...then saw that there was more. :onfire: close call...
hetaliafff Mar 27, 2014  New member
Lol that's wat I thought I was like :iconspazattackplz: lol c:
Fortheloveofchaos Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ok, okay, calm down, me there's more...:iconcryingplz:
Theghostofyoutoo Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh thank god. I read it and got hit by a truck of feels. I was sad but then saw that there were more parts! :iconsqueeeeplz:
OMG what a beautiful story but like if he hit me forreal I would have probably wiped out a metal pipe flung straight towards him hehe XD
DragonSkaterofFAB Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MUST. NOT. CRY!!!! Ahh, screw it. :iconcryforeverplz:  ahfblakfhgbjkladsngjivnlsjcv sorry, that was just me wiping them tears off my keyboard.
IfYouSayYouLoveMe Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist
MUST.... FAVE.... ahhh got it<3
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