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~5:00 A.M.~

Ludwig's Pov

I voke up at five like I do everyday,I turned over and noticed zhat zhe weight on my right wasn't zhere.
"Maybe she voke up early.",I thought to myself.
Shrugging it off I changed into my uniform,and walked out into the kitchen,"She isn't in here,hmm maybes she's in the other room."
I walked into the other room and she wasn't there,"Nein,she couldn't have."
I ran outside to see that (Y/N) vas not zhere.
"Sheisse,she left me."
I fell to meine knees and cried,I just lost the best zhing zhat ever happened to me.

~Tell Me are you just getting by,by,by~

~During the War~

~Where there is desire there is gonna be a flame
Where there is a flame someone's bound to get burned
But just because it burns doesn't mean your gonna die
(You gotta get up and try and try and try
Gotta get up and try and try and try )x7

I could not focus on all zhe work zhat meine boss had asked me to do,"I knew she said zhat if  I didn't stop zhis nonsense ,zhat she vould leave." I didn't take her seriously.
So zhe days vent by and I began to vonder vhat vent vrong,I had hit her,I had left her all alone,and I never took zhe time off from vork to spend time vith her.
"I'm zhe vorst boyfriend in zhis vorld,(Y/N) deserves better."
Later zhat following week,I vas assigned to go to var.

I couldn't focus on zhe enemy at all,meine mind vas on (Y/N),I the bullets from the enemy and ran for cover,"Ve~Germany,help a me."
I turned around to help meine friend Feliciano(N.Italy),I grabbed him by the shirt and pushed him towards safety.

"GERMANY,WATCH OUT!!!",before I could even turn around I heard a gun being fired and a sharp intense pain coming from my side.
"This is for killing my little Bella,Da"

"GERMANY!",Feliciano ran towards me crying,Kiku ran over to me as vell.
"Germany,please a don't a die,who will help a me make a pasta?"he cried.
Kiku ripped off his shirt sleeve and placed it over meine wound,to stop zhe bleeding.
"Hang in there Germany."Kiku said.

I felt meine eyes grow heavy and closed zhem,"Please Germany,don't die you have to try for (Y/N)'s sake." the italian cried.

I smiled at mein friends and asked zhem that once zhis var ends to tell (Y/N) zhat I'm sorry for everything,they nodded.

Before meine vision went black,I swore zhat I saw (Y/N),as an angel smiling at me.

~You gotta get up and try and try and try
Gotta get up and try and try and try~
I'm sorry if this one is a little short,I'm not really good when it comes to writing fight scenes.
So here's the last part of this series.
Hope you like it. :)

Also,there will be a surprise ending with the baby. Yay ^_^
Cuz' I'm awesome like that.


Part 1: [link]

Part 2: [link]

Part 3: [link]

Part 4: [link]

Part 5: [link]

Part 6: [link]

Part 7: Here

Part 8 (Finale): [link]
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AnimezingOtaku 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
TT^TT Damn. Right in my feels.
HannahTheWriter123 Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
NO!!!!!!! DX
*le gasp!*
Such a good story!~ TwT
hetaliafff Mar 27, 2014  New member
:iconcryforeverplz: beautiful my friend, just beautiful
did russia just say bella? lol wut
watermelonkoala Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Chrysti-the-goddess Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Germany, please don't die. :iconcryingcronaplz: I don't know how to handle that. I love you.
Fortheloveofchaos Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dear Germany,
I know that you've been the worst boyfriend ever, you have slapped me, pretty much raped me, knocked me up and killed my best friend.
But for God's sake, IF YOU DIE I WILL KILL YOU
Sincerely, Reader-chan (me)
I totally agree. Definitely.
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